My first poetic creation ... meant to be more philosophical than poetic ..
The Long Road of life ...
I walk it down all alone
you go ... go ahead
but do stop and turn back ..
coz the road has no end
only craziness .. and madness
the worlds madness ..
there to crush u exploit u harm u
but let confidence be ur greatest strength
but remember its overdose may become ur biggest weakness
do well
as i trudge the road slowly
all alone .. with tears in my eyes
tears not of sadness .. but just
shear emotion
i trudge down the road
the long empty road to success ..
but yes ill stop
stop when this quest for success takes my peace of mind
coz mental peace and happiness
is the ultimate goal of my life ......
On a lighter note ... if u don find this poetic consider it as an art of modern poetry .. you know the one which just has free verse and doesn't have to rhyme ...
coz it sure makes a hell lotta sense !!!
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it's called blank verse, when it doesn't rhyme.
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nice.
It's not THAT much sense either, for u say what everyone knows, but are quiet on wat noone does.
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